I've been trying to get a half decent book Fiyero for a while now. These are the first bunch of sketches and colour tests and all that shiz, numbered in the order that I did them. So maybe there's some sort of improvement going on? I dunno.
I kinda like the first one the best actually, and I really like that diamond pattern, as it's something like the one I'd pictured. I wish the book had gone into a bit more detail on the diamonds, as it's the one thing that is the hardest to put together without looking ridiculous You did a really good job on it